It Hurts
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What hurts the most ?
People often times wonder ?
Being betrayed by the one you love ?
Loosing the one you love ?
Or having a family who doesn't believe in you ?
Please I need an answer
This pain needs surgery
My heart's too heavy
I can no longer feel my breath
My eyes are too watery to see
What hurts the most ?
Watching a friend die and there is nothing you can do ?
Dying to help but you don't have the means ?
Having your hope crushed to piece ?
Please someone answer me.
This pains needs an operation
There is nothing left in my brains
Am so hurt, my feet threads upon fire like water
My body is a tsunami
What hurts the most ?
Not being able to express yourself ?
Or not having anyone to listen to you ?
What hurts the most ?
Having no friends or family to call your own ?
Or waking up one morning to find out that you've being fooled by your all and all..
Please someone answer me ?
Doctors are operating ?
It hurts.. It hurts
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Please don't leave without an answer ?
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You bring out the emotion and conflict so well here. It is so well expressed. Voted up and awesome.
Touching good job.
This is such a sad poem, it takes time to heal and forgive.
Oh My friend.. great wonderful beautiful poem.. If you need prayer please let me know.. I will pray..
If you are on Facebook, if you want we could be friends.
Deborah Brooks Langford
It does, though with time, I have come to realize that, it is easy to heal and forgive when you don't hate.. Am trying not.. It is really a sad and depressing poem
Being a while.. Thanks.
feels don't lie.. Thanks for the vote..
And for finding time to read. It means alot to me
Pasted and slept.. Just woke up.. I was a huge relieve when I realize how much people cared.. Thanks.
Deborah Brooks. That will be nice and kind of you
My most pressing need right now, will be for
God to give me wisdom and Direction..
Thanks a lot. I appreciate
Wow that was deep. We are all feeling like that from time to time. Life is full of obstacles that we must overcome. Great hub!
Thanks man.. Life's tough.. And I thank God each breaking day.
Your pain is palpable in this piece--take care of yourself!
Thanks AndreyHowitt, I will.. I will
You've have a few of us praying for you, my new friend.
And I sincerely appreciate your prayers.. They mean alot to me. Thanks once again. And thanks for your time....
Though am alot better now.. But prayer is never too much..
The good book say.. Pray without seasoning..
Thanks once again.
Beautifully expressed - you really captured the internal anguish we can feel in so many of life's situations. Thanks for sharing - voted up and beautiful.
Capedium, Deep! All of the above can be painful! You have expressed despair very well! There is no pain so deep that the Lord cannot in His time heal and restore! It is the perfect time to draw closer to Him! "The JOY of the LORD is your strength!" God Bless YOU!
Amen.. I believe He has.. Thanks for caring you are God sent.
Often forgiveness can set you free. Don't hate those who hurt you, wish them well. It will hurt you LESS. All that comes our way is there for a reason, to let us grow, to make us better and stronger.
Yes they are.. Thanks for the enocuragement
Capedium, somehow I missed this, but better late than never.
Just need to add to the mountain of voices and genuine support above, this is sad to the core, but what doesn't kill us will make us stronger, and my friend, you are strong.
It is never too late and of course, I appreciate your comment.
flashmakeit Level 5 Commenter 4 months ago
that seems so sad I can feel the pain